The dispatch news and commentary evaluations
1.Phase one: parking lot complete
Who: administration
What:The new student parking lot
When: begun 2018-19 school year
Where: bowie high school
Why: more parking availability
How:
2. The story talks about how the construction of the new parking garage has reached end of phase one. And how beneficial the parking lot will be to student and the commute to school everyday. The story also talks about how the construction has to work around students so they can have a regular school day with no disturbances.
3. Jack Whaley- direct quote, David Murphey- direct quote, Emma Davis- direct quote.
4. No opinions in this story.
5. i think that the title does summarize the story because it gets the point across that the construction is moving along to phase 2.
6.yes
1.State votes in over 800 law following latest session.
Who: governor Greg Abbott.
What: 800 new laws that are going to effect students and staff in school.
When: none
Where: The capitol
Why: protecting students
How: none
2. In this story the state votes on more that 800 laws that will effect students teachers and staff. Teachers will receive higher wages and students will be protected from tobacco at school. These new laws will help schools make a safer environment for students.
3. Dalton Pool- direct quote, Abbas Akhtar- direct quote, Makena Patterson- direct quote.
4. no
5. The headline of the story shows that there are new laws that will be in place so i think that is represents the story well.
6. yes
1. The stewing storm of sweet smoke
Who: students at bowie and the staff
What: vaping and the effects on students
When: now
Where: Bowie High school
Why: vaping related illnesses are taking a toll on students
How: the popularity of e-cigs in schools attracting students to the addiction.
2. The story focuses on the effect of vaping on students. It also talks about how dangerous vaping is and how addictive its getting. Staff has had to ban tabbacco on campus because of the fact that the legal age of using nicotine products has gone up to 21.
3. Ben Satler- direct quote, Jessica Davis- direct quote
4. no
5.The headline of the story shows that there is a problem brewing among students and vaping.
6. yes
1.New policy provides teachers with silence during lunch.
Who: students and staff
What: silence for teachers during lunch
When: this school year
Where: Academic halls of Bowie
Why: Respect for teachers.
How: hallways were too loud for teachers.
2. teachers are provided with silence during lunch because students are no longer alowed to eat in the academic hallways. Students can eat anywhere else like the cafeteria, fine arts building, the courtyard, and in the C and D hallways.
3. Mark Robinson (principle)- direct quote, Assistant principle Stephanie McGraw- direct quote, Ashley Spiro(science teacher)- direct quote, Danny Burton- direct quote, Brandy Ramos (biology teacher)- direct quote, Elissa Wechsler- direct quote.
4.no opinions
5. The headline of the story is good because it shows the benefits the teachers get from keeping students out of the academic halls.
6. yes
1. New class offering: Ethnic Studies.
Who: Students and teachers
What: New class
When: 2023-2025
Where: Bowie High School
Why: for a new perspective of students, helps people understand who they are.
How: AISD meeting
2. The new class for ethnic studies will begin by 2023-2025. this new class will help students understand themselves and where they came from and will create a new perspective for them as they learn to accept others.
3.Carlen Floyd- direct quote, Liam Kornacki- direct quote, Senior Marina Rameriez-direct quote, Anamarie Jarmon-Booker -direct quote.
4. no
5.The headline is straight to the point of the story which i think is good for a newspaper headline because it tells people what they want to hear.
6.yes
1. First FFA grooming day this year.
Who: Bowie agriculture program
What: Grooming day for pets by students
When: September 27th 2019
Where: Bowie Highschool
Why: Prepare students for animal related activities in the real world.
How: through 2 services provided by students that treats your pet.
2.Students of the agriculture program treat your pet through a spa day that includes bathing, brushing, trimming nails and cleaning ears, along with 2 walks with pickup being at the end of the school day. This program is for preparing students for any animal related job a student might want in the future.
3.Amber Dickinson- direct quote.
4.no opinions
5.The title is good but i think that it need a bit more explanation on what FFA really is.
6.no photo
1. New student news resource app.
Who: The Dispatch
What: News resource app
When: none
Where: On your phone/ Bowie high school.
Why: accesibility
How: an idea from editor-in-chief Kaitlyn Zellner.
2. An app for the newspaper was an idea made up by Kaitlyn Zellner who is the editor-in-chief of the dispatch. The app will help with accessibility to the newspaper because almost everyone has a phone.
3.Kaitlyn Zellner- direct quote.
4. no.
5. The headline is good because it has everything it needs to be able to tell a story.
6.no photo
Who: administration
What:The new student parking lot
When: begun 2018-19 school year
Where: bowie high school
Why: more parking availability
How:
2. The story talks about how the construction of the new parking garage has reached end of phase one. And how beneficial the parking lot will be to student and the commute to school everyday. The story also talks about how the construction has to work around students so they can have a regular school day with no disturbances.
3. Jack Whaley- direct quote, David Murphey- direct quote, Emma Davis- direct quote.
4. No opinions in this story.
5. i think that the title does summarize the story because it gets the point across that the construction is moving along to phase 2.
6.yes
1.State votes in over 800 law following latest session.
Who: governor Greg Abbott.
What: 800 new laws that are going to effect students and staff in school.
When: none
Where: The capitol
Why: protecting students
How: none
2. In this story the state votes on more that 800 laws that will effect students teachers and staff. Teachers will receive higher wages and students will be protected from tobacco at school. These new laws will help schools make a safer environment for students.
3. Dalton Pool- direct quote, Abbas Akhtar- direct quote, Makena Patterson- direct quote.
4. no
5. The headline of the story shows that there are new laws that will be in place so i think that is represents the story well.
6. yes
1. The stewing storm of sweet smoke
Who: students at bowie and the staff
What: vaping and the effects on students
When: now
Where: Bowie High school
Why: vaping related illnesses are taking a toll on students
How: the popularity of e-cigs in schools attracting students to the addiction.
2. The story focuses on the effect of vaping on students. It also talks about how dangerous vaping is and how addictive its getting. Staff has had to ban tabbacco on campus because of the fact that the legal age of using nicotine products has gone up to 21.
3. Ben Satler- direct quote, Jessica Davis- direct quote
4. no
5.The headline of the story shows that there is a problem brewing among students and vaping.
6. yes
1.New policy provides teachers with silence during lunch.
Who: students and staff
What: silence for teachers during lunch
When: this school year
Where: Academic halls of Bowie
Why: Respect for teachers.
How: hallways were too loud for teachers.
2. teachers are provided with silence during lunch because students are no longer alowed to eat in the academic hallways. Students can eat anywhere else like the cafeteria, fine arts building, the courtyard, and in the C and D hallways.
3. Mark Robinson (principle)- direct quote, Assistant principle Stephanie McGraw- direct quote, Ashley Spiro(science teacher)- direct quote, Danny Burton- direct quote, Brandy Ramos (biology teacher)- direct quote, Elissa Wechsler- direct quote.
4.no opinions
5. The headline of the story is good because it shows the benefits the teachers get from keeping students out of the academic halls.
6. yes
1. New class offering: Ethnic Studies.
Who: Students and teachers
What: New class
When: 2023-2025
Where: Bowie High School
Why: for a new perspective of students, helps people understand who they are.
How: AISD meeting
2. The new class for ethnic studies will begin by 2023-2025. this new class will help students understand themselves and where they came from and will create a new perspective for them as they learn to accept others.
3.Carlen Floyd- direct quote, Liam Kornacki- direct quote, Senior Marina Rameriez-direct quote, Anamarie Jarmon-Booker -direct quote.
4. no
5.The headline is straight to the point of the story which i think is good for a newspaper headline because it tells people what they want to hear.
6.yes
1. First FFA grooming day this year.
Who: Bowie agriculture program
What: Grooming day for pets by students
When: September 27th 2019
Where: Bowie Highschool
Why: Prepare students for animal related activities in the real world.
How: through 2 services provided by students that treats your pet.
2.Students of the agriculture program treat your pet through a spa day that includes bathing, brushing, trimming nails and cleaning ears, along with 2 walks with pickup being at the end of the school day. This program is for preparing students for any animal related job a student might want in the future.
3.Amber Dickinson- direct quote.
4.no opinions
5.The title is good but i think that it need a bit more explanation on what FFA really is.
6.no photo
1. New student news resource app.
Who: The Dispatch
What: News resource app
When: none
Where: On your phone/ Bowie high school.
Why: accesibility
How: an idea from editor-in-chief Kaitlyn Zellner.
2. An app for the newspaper was an idea made up by Kaitlyn Zellner who is the editor-in-chief of the dispatch. The app will help with accessibility to the newspaper because almost everyone has a phone.
3.Kaitlyn Zellner- direct quote.
4. no.
5. The headline is good because it has everything it needs to be able to tell a story.
6.no photo
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